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A Victory Worth Sharing - Part One
Looks like he made it! 
It was great writing these, because they're more my age. I didn't have to try so hard to work out how they might think and act. :p

It was great writing these, because they're more my age. I didn't have to try so hard to work out how they might think and act. :p
Queen Bee.
Guess how much I love you? Go on. Guess?
...Does this make Matt his King? *eyebrow waggle*
Guess how much I love you? Go on. Guess?
...Does this make Matt his King? *eyebrow waggle*
*stretches my arms out as wide as they'll go* That much? 
That's a really funky trick with the eyebrows.

That's a really funky trick with the eyebrows.
More than that!
Double it!
Double it!
Whoa! I got a credit! I feel so special!
Mello in diamonds omg! That's just about the only way you could make him flashier than he already is as a young man.
And "queen bee" is the PERFECT nickname for his subordinates to call him.

Mello in diamonds omg! That's just about the only way you could make him flashier than he already is as a young man.
And "queen bee" is the PERFECT nickname for his subordinates to call him.
Your ideas were invaluable in writing this. You deserved the credit. 
I have to admit to giggling to myself when I came up with Queen Bee.

I have to admit to giggling to myself when I came up with Queen Bee.
*giggles at Mello's description* diamonds and power... the Mello in my head looks even more like a pimp! XD i'm very eager for the next.
This is utterly fantastic. I was bouncing in my seat with excitement by the time Mello made his way in. I love how they were all referring to him as Queen Bee. XD How fitting, yeah? Gaaah! Then the fact that that whole organization is what became of the Mello Code is mind blowing. Mello = Teh pwnage. |:
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Yay! I'm glad that you liked it! It was for you. 

Uwaaah~!! Such suspense.
I'm trying to put Mello together with diamonds... And it's kinda not working too well, I admit...... XD
Wow. Way to write a seven-part one-shot. XD I'll forgive you on the basis that your writing is epic win, no matter how long or short it is.
oh, and lol @ "queen bee."
I'm trying to put Mello together with diamonds... And it's kinda not working too well, I admit...... XD
Wow. Way to write a seven-part one-shot. XD I'll forgive you on the basis that your writing is epic win, no matter how long or short it is.
oh, and lol @ "queen bee."
Yeah, I must admit I can't see Mello wearing diamonds. Dunno, it makes me think of Beckam LOL
http://www.dalesorenson.net/uploaded_images/guy_with_earrings.jpg
A football player ^^
A football player ^^
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David Beckham is a football player. Played for Manchester United before moving on.
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The future Mello? Mmmm
I'm on my knees praying that doesn't make Victoria a future Matt ;__;
Beckham would be ok if it wasn't for her, and...well, he played in the Real Madrid ¬¬ worst team ever
Beckham would be ok if it wasn't for her, and...well, he played in the Real Madrid ¬¬ worst team ever
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Have a look at the other comments. Spoiled-Kitten mentioned Beckham and I just posted a photo of him with his diamonds. Melloesque possibly?
Queen Bee.
Queen Bee.
Ehh, possibly. XD. I'll tell you, however, the idea of Mello in diamonds is growing on me.
lol. It fits. Almost too well.
lol. It fits. Almost too well.
Ooooh, I be caught in suspense! 8O Can't wait for more
yay! My work here is done.
*squeals* Older!Mello!!!! I can't wait for the next part... *sits her ass down and waits*
Gooooood! I have installed Mozilla and uninstalled my favourite IE just to get here and to read something new from you, Matti Because IE didn't want to let me in!! That's really wow! Probably i should keep mozilla. X))
God...I want Mello and Matt forever young...I can't think bout them getting older and stuff... Mello looks great though! Realy kewl! *tries not to think bout gray hair, a set of false teeth and a bad smell* X))))
God...I want Mello and Matt forever young...I can't think bout them getting older and stuff... Mello looks great though! Realy kewl! *tries not to think bout gray hair, a set of false teeth and a bad smell* X))))
Yay! Another convert! Mozilla is far better. It's faster, less buggy and less prone to getting attacked by all the viruses that webmasters add in revenge for the extra work that IE users cause them. 
Mello and Matt as old men. Now there's a story.

Mello and Matt as old men. Now there's a story.
Lulz, the comments are Halloween coloured.
Yes! I can see that!
I was scrolling down the page, and I saw that football player. I swooned a little.
A Beckham fan then.
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12:26 PM
Mello, with his own high-tech building, employees, etc. Can't wait to see what happens next!