A Victory Worth Sharing - Part One by MRS-Jeevas
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A Victory Worth Sharing - Part One

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jrenee07 10 Oct 09
12:26 PM
jrenee07 Is a yaoi fan who edited their profile
omg! How did I miss this?! :is rectifying, pronto:

Mello, with his own high-tech building, employees, etc. Can't wait to see what happens next! (smiley)
MRS-Jeevas 11 Oct 09
6:24 AM
* MRS-Jeevas a Wammy kid who... two secs, just get this level...
Looks like he made it! (smiley)

It was great writing these, because they're more my age. I didn't have to try so hard to work out how they might think and act. :p
Melissa 8 Jun 09
8:57 PM
* Melissa is a Seme!Matt who is the Captain of the USS Enterprise
Queen Bee.

Guess how much I love you? Go on. Guess?

...Does this make Matt his King? *eyebrow waggle*
MRS-Jeevas 13 Jun 09
11:24 AM
* MRS-Jeevas a Wammy kid who... two secs, just get this level...
*stretches my arms out as wide as they'll go* That much? (smiley)

That's a really funky trick with the eyebrows.
Melissa 14 Jun 09
3:45 PM
* Melissa is a Seme!Matt who is the Captain of the USS Enterprise
More than that! (smiley) Double it!
MRS-Jeevas 4 Jul 09
4:25 AM
* MRS-Jeevas a Wammy kid who... two secs, just get this level...
O_____O WOW!
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chaosattractor 8 Jun 09
5:20 PM
* chaosattractor is a strange attractor
Whoa! I got a credit! I feel so special!(smiley)

Mello in diamonds omg! That's just about the only way you could make him flashier than he already is as a young man. (smiley) And "queen bee" is the PERFECT nickname for his subordinates to call him.
MRS-Jeevas 4 Jul 09
5:05 AM
* MRS-Jeevas a Wammy kid who... two secs, just get this level...
Your ideas were invaluable in writing this. You deserved the credit. (smiley)

I have to admit to giggling to myself when I came up with Queen Bee.
chaosattractor 8 Jul 09
1:34 AM
* chaosattractor is a strange attractor
Thanks!
divinefanaticy 7 Jun 09
9:28 PM
divinefanaticy Is an artist who cosplays at school
*giggles at Mello's description* diamonds and power... the Mello in my head looks even more like a pimp! XD i'm very eager for the next. (smiley)
MRS-Jeevas 4 Jul 09
5:12 AM
* MRS-Jeevas a Wammy kid who... two secs, just get this level...
(smiley)
blAIRbender 7 Jun 09
3:27 PM
blAIRbender Is a PlayStation fan who prefers the first generation Pokémon
This is utterly fantastic. I was bouncing in my seat with excitement by the time Mello made his way in. I love how they were all referring to him as Queen Bee. XD How fitting, yeah? Gaaah! Then the fact that that whole organization is what became of the Mello Code is mind blowing. Mello = Teh pwnage. |:

Can't wait to read the next chapter! (smiley)
MRS-Jeevas 4 Jul 09
5:38 AM
* MRS-Jeevas a Wammy kid who... two secs, just get this level...
Yay! I'm glad that you liked it! It was for you. (smiley)

(smiley)
MellosPuppy 7 Jun 09
2:21 PM
MellosPuppy Is a puppy!Matt who squeals like a fangirl
Uwaaah~!! Such suspense.

I'm trying to put Mello together with diamonds... And it's kinda not working too well, I admit...... XD

Wow. Way to write a seven-part one-shot. XD I'll forgive you on the basis that your writing is epic win, no matter how long or short it is.




oh, and lol @ "queen bee."
Spoiled-Kitten 7 Jun 09
2:45 PM
* Spoiled-Kitten Is a neko who draws yaoi
Yeah, I must admit I can't see Mello wearing diamonds. Dunno, it makes me think of Beckam LOL
MellosPuppy 7 Jun 09
4:55 PM
MellosPuppy Is a puppy!Matt who squeals like a fangirl
(smiley)'

um.... who's Beckam?
Spoiled-Kitten 8 Jun 09
4:16 AM
* Spoiled-Kitten Is a neko who draws yaoi
http://www.dalesorenson.net/uploaded_images/guy_with_earrings.jpg

A football player ^^
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MRS-Jeevas 4 Jul 09
5:23 AM
* MRS-Jeevas a Wammy kid who... two secs, just get this level...
David Beckham is a football player. Played for Manchester United before moving on.
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MRS-Jeevas 4 Jul 09
5:41 AM
* MRS-Jeevas a Wammy kid who... two secs, just get this level...


The future Mello? Mmmm
Spoiled-Kitten 4 Jul 09
5:52 AM
* Spoiled-Kitten Is a neko who draws yaoi
I'm on my knees praying that doesn't make Victoria a future Matt ;__;

Beckham would be ok if it wasn't for her, and...well, he played in the Real Madrid ¬¬ worst team ever
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MRS-Jeevas 4 Jul 09
5:43 AM
* MRS-Jeevas a Wammy kid who... two secs, just get this level...
Have a look at the other comments. Spoiled-Kitten mentioned Beckham and I just posted a photo of him with his diamonds. Melloesque possibly?

(smiley) Queen Bee.
MellosPuppy 5 Jul 09
2:45 PM
MellosPuppy Is a puppy!Matt who squeals like a fangirl
Ehh, possibly. XD. I'll tell you, however, the idea of Mello in diamonds is growing on me.

lol. It fits. Almost too well.
MRS-Jeevas 6 Jul 09
8:08 AM
* MRS-Jeevas a Wammy kid who... two secs, just get this level...
(smiley)
DessArtem 7 Jun 09
1:35 PM
DessArtem Is an angel who bites anything
Ooooh, I be caught in suspense! 8O Can't wait for more (smiley)
MRS-Jeevas 4 Jul 09
5:44 AM
* MRS-Jeevas a Wammy kid who... two secs, just get this level...
yay! My work here is done. (smiley)
WindyRein 7 Jun 09
1:24 PM
WindyRein is a spirit of the wind who dances in the rain...and is a perv.
*squeals* Older!Mello!!!! I can't wait for the next part... *sits her ass down and waits*
MRS-Jeevas 4 Jul 09
5:45 AM
* MRS-Jeevas a Wammy kid who... two secs, just get this level...
(smiley)
magicspoon 7 Jun 09
1:10 PM
magicspoon Is a PlayStation fan who can't write a sentence without "XD"
Gooooood! I have installed Mozilla and uninstalled my favourite IE just to get here and to read something new from you, Matti Because IE didn't want to let me in!! That's really wow! Probably i should keep mozilla. X))
God...I want Mello and Matt forever young...I can't think bout them getting older and stuff... Mello looks great though! Realy kewl! *tries not to think bout gray hair, a set of false teeth and a bad smell* X))))
MRS-Jeevas 4 Jul 09
6:05 AM
* MRS-Jeevas a Wammy kid who... two secs, just get this level...
Yay! Another convert! Mozilla is far better. It's faster, less buggy and less prone to getting attacked by all the viruses that webmasters add in revenge for the extra work that IE users cause them. (smiley)

(smiley) Mello and Matt as old men. Now there's a story. (smiley)
Blondie-love 7 Jun 09
12:54 PM
* Blondie-love is the bookworm who just lost the game
Lulz, the comments are Halloween coloured. (smiley)
MRS-Jeevas 4 Jul 09
5:45 AM
* MRS-Jeevas a Wammy kid who... two secs, just get this level...
(smiley) Yes! I can see that! (smiley)
Blondie-love 4 Jul 09
11:31 AM
* Blondie-love is the bookworm who just lost the game
I was scrolling down the page, and I saw that football player. I swooned a little. (smiley)
MRS-Jeevas 4 Jul 09
11:58 AM
* MRS-Jeevas a Wammy kid who... two secs, just get this level...
A Beckham fan then. (smiley)
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Congratulations to blAIRbender and LoonyLoonyLaur, who won my 20,000 hits competition!

These ladies won a one-shot written by me and so came up with the theme of Mello and Matt as 30 Somethings. It caught my imagination somewhat, not least because they are my own age. Hence the one-shot grew into a four-shot.

It was extended further when Eddz posted about MangaBullet's birthday celebrations. This is now a seven part story, which will be serialised each day this week, as my contribution to the festivities.

Thank you to chaosattractor, who spared the time to help me imagine what the world might look like in 15 years time.

Finally, I will write a drabble, on the theme/characters of your choice, for the first person to comment as to precisely why I've named these stories 'A Victory Worth Sharing'. (smiley)
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