Teardrops of Life
28 Oct 091:43 AM
You manage to draw lips~ o3o Good for you. Her lips look nice, all lipgloss-y and puffy~
Her eyes are pretty as anything, and I like her neck(hahaawhat? "orz).
Is real hair that streak-y though? And with all the same size streaks? Something to think about.
Maybe the tear-flower could have been a bit sharper and more defined, but it's still pretty.
Your semi-realism looks like my semi-realism, minus the puffy lips, that slim eyes, and the hair, just that this is prettier. xD
I'm not meaning anything bad with my critique-y like sentences, it's just stuff I can't resist saying.
The piece isn't a piece of scrap, it's good, and pieces like this can only get better, so...
Please don't feel bad about anything I said... "OTZ
Her eyes are pretty as anything, and I like her neck(hahaawhat? "orz).
Is real hair that streak-y though? And with all the same size streaks? Something to think about.
Maybe the tear-flower could have been a bit sharper and more defined, but it's still pretty.
Your semi-realism looks like my semi-realism, minus the puffy lips, that slim eyes, and the hair, just that this is prettier. xD
I'm not meaning anything bad with my critique-y like sentences, it's just stuff I can't resist saying.
The piece isn't a piece of scrap, it's good, and pieces like this can only get better, so...
Please don't feel bad about anything I said... "OTZ
28 Oct 091:05 PM
um...for the hair streaky thing...it wasnt that bad when i first colored it, but when i went to distort it to make it darker, it like..died xD;; thats why it appears so streaky.
They would be the same size...
i tried to make the teardrop sharper, but it wouldnt do so without me wasting a lot of time and redoing it T^T
thanks for the compliments....the reason why i didnt want critique on this picture is because ive already posted this on my dA and sA...trust me, i already know what i did wrong XD; i just didnt feel like hearing it again .3.
BUT THANKYOU ANYWAY 8D
They would be the same size...
i tried to make the teardrop sharper, but it wouldnt do so without me wasting a lot of time and redoing it T^T
thanks for the compliments....the reason why i didnt want critique on this picture is because ive already posted this on my dA and sA...trust me, i already know what i did wrong XD; i just didnt feel like hearing it again .3.
BUT THANKYOU ANYWAY 8D
29 Oct 091:19 AM
Oh dear, I see..
I honestly wasn't trying to critique either, it was just those little pointer-outs that got inbetween my sentences.. .-. Did my best on concentrating on what you did right though! >A<;; I just fail like that... Sorry..!"orz
You're welcome. ;3;
I honestly wasn't trying to critique either, it was just those little pointer-outs that got inbetween my sentences.. .-. Did my best on concentrating on what you did right though! >A<;; I just fail like that... Sorry..!"orz
You're welcome. ;3;
29 Oct 0911:42 AM
yes, you do see xD
ahhh...its okay. .3.
ahhh...its okay. .3.
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heh....yeah...i attempted realism *fails*
SO IT IS NOW SEMI-REALISM >D AHA.
I did this without reference .3.; It's not a serious attempt for realism so please no critique....I dont mind it, but when somebody critiques a piece of crap like this, it makes me feel bad :<
yeah. Thats about it...xD; took me about...5-6 hours to do, i guesss....of course with a lot of distractions..
EDIT:
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